<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071</id><updated>2011-10-23T06:31:19.386-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Completefiction4us</title><subtitle type='html'>CompleteFiction comes out of the UNO Madrid Summer Seminar 2004.  We are a community of writers sharing ideas and information. 

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Jesse</subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default?max-results=100'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><link rel='next' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default?start-index=101&amp;max-results=100'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>114</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>100</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-3861813024306989906</id><published>2011-07-14T22:35:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2011-07-14T22:38:45.550-07:00</updated><title type='text'>To a press</title><summary type='text'>Tegument(inner)agreement and argument cease yet never beginno flower, lotus or brown-eyed susanunfolds slowly or instantly waiting at a bus stop and wateringa tree that owns itself without admission exploration and seeking at onceworthless as meditation and other hidings not even only (more)each perception judges completelyattempting to recall this while listeningincreases the perception (insided</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/3861813024306989906/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=3861813024306989906' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/3861813024306989906'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/3861813024306989906'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2011/07/to-press.html' title='To a press'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-673480819730378914</id><published>2011-06-22T19:53:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2011-06-22T20:02:13.908-07:00</updated><title type='text'>on surface enclosed</title><summary type='text'>my sayswithout saying something thats nottrue do something about ita few years agoi said yes and im not againstcharity invites itself alongyou da man entourage who do you think our celebrity is going to be oh no really sorry cause a comedianhaving a habit to make awkward situationssleeping in bed of surprised nothingsee you around the building i thought aboutalot batter up loves of america its </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/673480819730378914/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=673480819730378914' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/673480819730378914'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/673480819730378914'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2011/06/on-surface-enclosed.html' title='on surface enclosed'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-14260989666698395</id><published>2009-03-15T17:30:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-03-15T17:31:38.599-07:00</updated><title type='text'>The bats</title><summary type='text'>The Bats: March 15There’s nothing new on, but the bill comes, cold, loud,Dressed in a modest envelope that says I won’t put out.Outside the man has a can of sound he plays to the eavesWhere he has removed the grill to find it is still backed by a screenOf which no bat could slide in or out, which is preposterous, really,Because night after night I have parked my chair to hear the meepsAnd </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/14260989666698395/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=14260989666698395' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/14260989666698395'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/14260989666698395'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2009/03/bats.html' title='The bats'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-7566417722848939722</id><published>2009-03-07T22:06:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2009-03-07T22:07:03.323-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Havdalah (Separation)</title><summary type='text'>For Jes, because she keeps it going around here long after we all got lazy.You are not permitted to mark your bodyin honor of the dead, to use needles or inkas a way to diminish the hurt. There must bea separation between things, betweenthose in the ocean and those on the shore.I must learn not to reach out for a ghostin the night, try to uncompose all ofyour songs, find a way to imprint on my </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/7566417722848939722/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=7566417722848939722' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/7566417722848939722'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/7566417722848939722'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2009/03/havdalah-separation.html' title='Havdalah (Separation)'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-8905446405600139944</id><published>2008-06-17T08:46:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-06-17T08:47:51.039-07:00</updated><title type='text'>I am in the bath   /45</title><summary type='text'>I am in the bathHot water pouring in the new bath salt giftLavender and rose petals,Salt.The lavender from the older maid without children whose manCouldn’t stand her birds.Assault.The rose petals from the mom whose professor [ex)} left her when she conceived a son.SaltPillars that bind usLooking backBereft of all that flowsIce 9, Ice 9Pillars, that we are. At dinner, before the bath, the one </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/8905446405600139944/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=8905446405600139944' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/8905446405600139944'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/8905446405600139944'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2008/06/i-am-in-bath-45.html' title='I am in the bath   /45'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116449332424963107</id><published>2006-11-25T14:16:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2008-09-16T19:40:17.261-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Santivity</title><summary type='text'>DiscourseThel=lit tent with deer,hart powering outa reindeerCactus arms akimbo-  (This=is important not to be confused with the Roman signifier) lit resin fire is in the center of the scene-</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116449332424963107/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116449332424963107' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116449332424963107'/><link rel='self' 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title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116321923807758534'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116321923807758534'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/union.html' title='Union'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116295941412403863</id><published>2006-11-07T20:16:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T20:16:54.126-08:00</updated><title type='text'>this is this</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116295941412403863/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116295941412403863' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295941412403863'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295941412403863'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/this-is-this.html' title='this is this'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116295937666145714</id><published>2006-11-07T20:15:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T20:16:16.663-08:00</updated><title type='text'>this is a</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116295937666145714/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116295937666145714' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295937666145714'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295937666145714'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/this-is_07.html' title='this is a'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116295932738973396</id><published>2006-11-07T20:13:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T20:15:27.390-08:00</updated><title type='text'>this is</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116295932738973396/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116295932738973396' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295932738973396'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295932738973396'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/this-is.html' title='this is'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116295919658389687</id><published>2006-11-07T20:12:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T20:13:16.596-08:00</updated><title type='text'>this</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116295919658389687/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116295919658389687' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295919658389687'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116295919658389687'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/this.html' title='this'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116294605265941134</id><published>2006-11-07T16:12:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T16:36:19.386-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Alpha</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116294605265941134/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116294605265941134' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294605265941134'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294605265941134'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/alpha_116294605265941134.html' title='Alpha'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116294441659464526</id><published>2006-11-07T16:06:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T16:36:34.496-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Alphas</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116294441659464526/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116294441659464526' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294441659464526'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294441659464526'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/alphas.html' title='Alphas'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116294439157582342</id><published>2006-11-07T16:06:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T16:35:38.320-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Yama</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116294439157582342/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116294439157582342' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294439157582342'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294439157582342'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/yama.html' title='Yama'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116294436639414554</id><published>2006-11-07T16:05:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T16:06:06.396-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Rishis</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116294436639414554/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116294436639414554' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294436639414554'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294436639414554'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/rishis.html' title='Rishis'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116294434027980545</id><published>2006-11-07T16:05:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T16:05:40.280-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Akashic</title><summary type='text'></summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116294434027980545/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116294434027980545' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' 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rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116294431301556447' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294431301556447'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294431301556447'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/omegas.html' title='Omegas'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-116294420103404380</id><published>2006-11-07T16:01:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-11-07T16:03:58.206-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Omega</title><summary type='text'>´µµ¶·¸¹º»¼½¾¾¿ÀÁÂÃÄÅÆÇÈÉÊÊËÌÍÎÎÏÐÑÒÒÓÔÔÕÖ××ØÙÚÚÛÜÜÝÞßßàááâããäåææçèèéêêëììíîïïðñòóôõö÷øùúüýþÿ	  "#$&amp;'(*+,./02345789:;=&gt;?@ACDEFGHIJKLNOPQQRSTUVWXXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxz{|}~€‚ƒ„…†‡ˆ‰Š‹Œ‘’“”•–—˜˜™š›œžŸ  ¡¢£¤¥¦§¨©ªª«¬ ®¯°±²³´µ¶¶·¸¹º»¼½¾¿ÀÁÂÃÄÅÆÇÇÈÉÊËÌÍÍÎÏÐÐÑÒÓÓÔÕÖÖ×ØÙÙÚÛÜÜÝÞßààáâããäåæççèéêëìííîïðñòóôôõö÷øùúûüýþþÿ	  !"#$%&amp;'()*+,-./</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/116294420103404380/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=116294420103404380' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294420103404380'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/116294420103404380'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/11/omega.html' title='Omega'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-115783213939997769</id><published>2006-09-09T13:01:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2006-09-09T13:02:19.413-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Jyotis</title><summary type='text'>Jyoti Is(for she who is the only she)This opening is not a forgiveness needed  or a space appearing vacant   the back of your hand an imprint   softened granite; petaled breathOpening begin the past a granule  twine seeds within the tide  an approaching   separation as renewal    of bows a shared estuaryFormed through giving over memories as current  combine coalescing and dissolving   yet the </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/115783213939997769/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=115783213939997769' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/115783213939997769'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/115783213939997769'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/09/jyotis.html' title='Jyotis'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-115277704759912762</id><published>2006-07-13T00:50:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2006-07-13T00:50:47.610-07:00</updated><title type='text'>ready sent sediment</title><summary type='text'>i give overand again within onlysubject in movement tippingloose and softened to the nubsa nail growing onthe top drawn foldedtaken the root levelingplacement routing another memorizedact as ifmeaning in consumption dormantsunderneath what is dividingat timing a specific colorthe backdrop fallen revelatoryinstigations birth further onlythis annointed abstraction durationeven unity consisted </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/115277704759912762/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=115277704759912762' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/115277704759912762'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/115277704759912762'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/07/ready-sent-sediment.html' title='ready sent sediment'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-115178415614027876</id><published>2006-07-01T13:02:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2006-07-01T13:02:36.150-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Piss Ekphrasis</title><summary type='text'>Ars PoeticaIn observing Piss in the Corner,That the art is drawn around itI am compelled by the right anglesThat the floor meets the perpendicular wallThat the wall rises like a monolith, like stoneHenged into the mystery, that so many times on the streets of  ChicagoThe men were making art Of grates, of newsstands, of alcoves, of seaMeant to be overlooked and yet in looking there wasPisa and the</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/115178415614027876/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=115178415614027876' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/115178415614027876'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/115178415614027876'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/07/piss-ekphrasis.html' title='Piss Ekphrasis'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-114675991517473912</id><published>2006-05-04T09:24:00.001-07:00</published><updated>2006-05-04T09:25:15.186-07:00</updated><title type='text'>At Night Stars Forget</title><summary type='text'>At Night Stars Forget“Two years of shells and bombs—a man won’t peel that off as easy as a sock.” All Quiet on the Western Front-- Erich Maria RemarqueI.Tonight the wine flag caught the sunsetUnder the dog stag and the tortured willow              The birds are singing now, no they are weeping. Tonight the flag draped the coffin of the man in his chairThat buried himself in doubt and tribute. </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/114675991517473912/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=114675991517473912' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/114675991517473912'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/114675991517473912'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/05/at-night-stars-forget_04.html' title='At Night Stars Forget'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-114576971247379198</id><published>2006-04-22T22:21:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2006-04-22T22:21:52.483-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><summary type='text'>WE WANT YOU TO USEless soil and grabbing diapers when the cooch is not the shoesaid outthere or sound for monkey or sound for cow or soundwhat does the say what does the saywhat does the sayshat does the say moonshat does the say shat does the sayaragon are hair aragon arsewhat doves the she say what doves thee saynot oink no not oinknore like wink wink wink moreliken asperate asperate ratttle </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/114576971247379198/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' 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one will read this anywayso now I will kill some puppiesby beating them with a bagfull of kittens</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/114020629542564580/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=114020629542564580' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/114020629542564580'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/114020629542564580'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/02/i-just-ate-some-children_17.html' title='I just ate some children'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113946564564598832</id><published>2006-02-08T21:21:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-02-08T22:31:13.640-08:00</updated><title type='text'>My First Narrative Poem (pl(EASE RESPONSE</title><summary type='text'>im sitting in fontsorryfront of a computerbut actually i am sitting with oneand there is a lot of rice wine to the rightof the keyboard and also in my belly and im worried or concerned about the other day i was walking down the streetok broadway and i had on my long black coatwhich my wife char bought for me because she thought it would make me come into my current ageand i suppose you have </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113946564564598832/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113946564564598832' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113946564564598832'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113946564564598832'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/02/my-first-narrative-poem-please.html' title='My First Narrative Poem (pl(EASE RESPONSE'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113946163660580148</id><published>2006-02-08T20:52:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-02-08T21:19:27.930-08:00</updated><title type='text'>do not respond</title><summary type='text'>a stick oversized roundunder held towardsand in sidedforced and later a show through lightone name and them the one namerepeated signal a response to meaning nothingleft of center an limp plowerflow no wards off center the objectionchannel the eleven know a stretch the pullthe chain the not considering a nervous wipebrow and second monitor the call read hearinglooked for at home wandering for the</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113946163660580148/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113946163660580148' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113946163660580148'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113946163660580148'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2006/02/do-not-respond.html' title='do not respond'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113806309010349321</id><published>2006-01-23T16:14:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2006-01-23T16:38:10.136-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Undefiner</title><summary type='text'>entry as finisheda few weeks as fin de siècleor aquatic period with liquidas bloodless      time as well differentiatedthe mattress on the floor coldand radiated drying two feet out or not underthe search became the ending or standing placefirst the point then the infinite points to lineto angle to mass to object to movement/time to velocity to observerof course the innovator was fearlessit came </summary><link 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src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>9</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113358765853318919</id><published>2005-12-02T21:26:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-12-02T21:27:38.543-08:00</updated><title type='text'>War</title><summary type='text'>I came to a conclusion tonight which is worth sharing.  Bush impelled us to war in search of WMDs, even though there was mounting evidence that none existed, even though diplomacy was not exhausted. He flip flopped his agenda from search to occupation, to salvation through Democracy.  Clearly, if we do not protest invading a country in order to spread Democracy, then we need to stand down in </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113358765853318919/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113358765853318919' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113358765853318919'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113358765853318919'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/12/war.html' title='War'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113350637615491991</id><published>2005-12-01T22:51:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-12-01T23:09:01.333-08:00</updated><title type='text'>haikus</title><summary type='text'>Orphic vacuumUndone by the hushAfter a steady diet of crickets, I call from the dark.The MedicEmpty kerlix boxA hand alone on the groundMan cannot be foundWaiting for the MedicAlone the cold sleepsOutside the tree frog creepsDay blind stars pierce dawnCreation in BaghdadExploding shells, shellsArtillery fire and blastCells divide at lastNumber 6Writing the Haikua leaf song on solid stonesa flesh </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113350637615491991/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113350637615491991' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113350637615491991'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113350637615491991'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/12/haikus.html' title='haikus'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113219964353226039</id><published>2005-11-16T19:51:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-11-17T16:37:27.270-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Pantoum for wounds</title><summary type='text'>We are fighting and dying for nothingevidence unfolds in the still bright puddles of mud Democracy spreads in the plastic battle dressings and Kerlix The rain comes down like Panama, thick and sticky with bloodEvidence unfolds in the still bright puddles of mudThe man crumpled, loose jointed, bobbing, a machine slowly breaking down. The rain came fast like Panama, thick and sticky with blood This</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113219964353226039/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113219964353226039' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113219964353226039'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113219964353226039'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/11/pantoum-for-wounds.html' title='Pantoum for wounds'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113063083477874817</id><published>2005-10-29T17:06:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-29T17:07:14.796-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Bitches of Lazy Sons</title><summary type='text'>translate somethingscaffolded assyou hearscaffolded sexual hunger entry cutthis and maybe allscaffold shit somethingsend to something youwant whatever elseor something from get offfishing grammar, hunting found a letter postpaste a strikepost yourpost Ipost ideasa me journalpost adviceyou the around phoneticallycut up a writer write about it to friendsinvert other to send it andor a translation </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113063083477874817/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113063083477874817' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113063083477874817'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113063083477874817'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/10/bitches-of-lazy-sons.html' title='Bitches of Lazy Sons'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113061394668050391</id><published>2005-10-29T12:20:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-29T12:25:46.680-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Lazy sons of bitches</title><summary type='text'>Get off your regal asses and post three poems each.Ideas:something horriblesomething foundsomething cut upsomething scaffolded from something else.Something scaffolded from someone you really understandsomething scaffolded from a writer that you hate.Something overtly sexual that I might enjoy.Something that defies grammartranslate, phonetically translate or invert a translationwrite about </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113061394668050391/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113061394668050391' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113061394668050391'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113061394668050391'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/10/lazy-sons-of-bitches.html' title='Lazy sons of bitches'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-113009272767052016</id><published>2005-10-23T11:38:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-23T11:38:47.676-07:00</updated><title type='text'>To views on the viewing</title><summary type='text'>1. the word orderhere the angles are sharpersteps run soft, longsoapstone shadows from lightnot of Helios leavingthe church enteringinto the water the greenfur drawing hair over hairbefore the temptation birthedout of the self, canalsfilled with bicycles and repetition,smoke in the doorwayspiercing past rays throughthe diaphonous cloudsheet, their boats, shoesfilled to the roped seam-line,but </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/113009272767052016/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=113009272767052016' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113009272767052016'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/113009272767052016'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/10/to-views-on-viewing.html' title='To views on the viewing'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112961573429655964</id><published>2005-10-17T23:03:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-17T23:08:54.736-07:00</updated><title type='text'>no title</title><summary type='text'>I am drinking the colytewaiting for the testa hollywood colonI am drinking Guarawaiting for the resta Winter salonI am drinkingand my son is fallingI am drinking tofind the snowglobe that is cancer insideand the chldren come and gounable to sleep on the late fall nightThe glass breaksthe class breaksinto a million fragmentsand I have to go becausei need to be clean on the inside.My son, my only </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112961573429655964/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112961573429655964' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112961573429655964'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112961573429655964'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/10/no-title.html' title='no title'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112831950228821393</id><published>2005-10-02T23:03:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-02T23:05:02.293-07:00</updated><title type='text'>After Eshleman's questions of being</title><summary type='text'>Is it that god’s will directs me or free willThe leaf spiraling down after the rainOr that I defy gravity and lift over the mountaintopsA spring seedling unfolding in the Iraqi sun.I have dreamt about the two rivers, the land ofMesopotamia and wear the scars of Enkidu in my left handOr am I a potential killer, dark slayer of Humbaba or the girlThat walks holding the hand of GilgameshI am </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112831950228821393/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112831950228821393' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112831950228821393'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112831950228821393'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/10/after-eshlemans-questions-of-being.html' title='After Eshleman&apos;s questions of being'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112692992418353928</id><published>2005-09-16T21:03:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-09-18T08:16:40.660-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CompleteFiction</title><summary type='text'>Fiction is truthabsolute and breathinga stone coltdead in the bageverything after the birthand birththe one hand reachingthe gate,the pen</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112692992418353928/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112692992418353928' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112692992418353928'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112692992418353928'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/09/completefiction.html' title='CompleteFiction'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112615102977784301</id><published>2005-09-07T20:42:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-09-07T20:43:49.786-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Meditations X</title><summary type='text'>a word is elegy to theconstellation of perception.  Neutrinos piercing us from dead stars  evil eye holing the head.Words in the mouth are tongueskissing and being kissed.Memory, a silver fish like spermswimming back to seed.They say bread resembles wheat rising in summerthe warmth of breasts.The invisible gesturegreeting against the cheek,Mourning negotiated in timber The tenderness lost in the </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112615102977784301/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112615102977784301' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112615102977784301'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112615102977784301'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/09/meditations-x.html' title='Meditations X'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112595313844136604</id><published>2005-09-05T13:45:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-09-05T13:45:38.456-07:00</updated><title type='text'>From Jennifer- another Katrina 1st hand account</title><summary type='text'>To UNO friends--Many of you know Brenda Quant from our CNF classes.  She was recently in both Suzanne's and Janice's classes and in Amanda's 2004 fiction, I believe.  I was certain you'd be interested in it,  so I'm forwarding it.LyndaTo all:Sunday, September 4, 2005  Ted and I are fine.  We thank everyone for their prayers and kindnesses.  Ted is on his way back from Selma where he transported </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112595313844136604/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112595313844136604' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112595313844136604'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112595313844136604'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/09/from-jennifer-another-katrina-1st-hand.html' title='From Jennifer- another Katrina 1st hand account'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112577007585878562</id><published>2005-09-03T10:35:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-09-03T16:07:40.956-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Everyone I know from UNO is safe</title><summary type='text'>http://hurricanepoetscheckin.blogspot.com/Bill, Nancy, Kay, Lee Ali and her sister Rosa, Dave Brinks, John Gery and family, Andrei CondrescuRed cross  links-   http://www.familylinks.icrc.org/katrinaSUsan Schultz sent this email:   I got this message from Laura Mullen, who teaches at LSU.  I don't thinkshe'll mind my sharing it:The extent of the catastrophe--and the lack of aid,the slowness &amp; </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112577007585878562/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112577007585878562' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112577007585878562'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112577007585878562'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/09/everyone-i-know-from-uno-is-safe.html' title='Everyone I know from UNO is safe'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112506945186188394</id><published>2005-08-26T08:16:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-26T08:17:31.863-07:00</updated><title type='text'>What have We Become</title><summary type='text'>What have We Become     There are now anti-Sheehan protesters!  Groups have mobilized to protest against the mother of a soldier who questions the purpose of her son’s death.  We shouldn’t be surprised. When violence is chic, hatred of women runs a parallel course.  Historically, when brutality and violence rule a political course, women are reduced to a narrow role as producers of war machines </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112506945186188394/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112506945186188394' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112506945186188394'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112506945186188394'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/08/what-have-we-become.html' title='What have We Become'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112466073972918883</id><published>2005-08-21T14:45:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-21T14:45:39.736-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Tejas</title><summary type='text'>When you left, I wrote a poem the size of a bulleton the side of the braceletyou bought as an apology.What is the heat like where you are,strumming your invisible guitar?What can you say in Spanishthat you could never say to me?</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112466073972918883/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112466073972918883' title='8 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112466073972918883'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112466073972918883'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/08/tejas.html' title='Tejas'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>8</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112385797374622398</id><published>2005-08-12T07:40:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-12T07:46:13.753-07:00</updated><title type='text'>two colors seperate merge</title><summary type='text'>two colors separate mergeinto a third labelnot either also not other elegance as a keyto reality next to ultimateuncreated partial recordhesitate remains unbein a vacuum as alwaysdetdetritus       detritusdetritus rare acknowledgedunsually a case given pauseone page dying the nextinborn mores structuresadam threat recedes onto distancelimbo bomb requires couragehow to pour out how to pour on </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112385797374622398/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112385797374622398' title='10 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112385797374622398'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112385797374622398'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/08/two-colors-seperate-merge.html' title='two colors seperate merge'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>10</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112218762206799461</id><published>2005-07-23T23:41:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-07-30T21:02:41.770-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Gift for Carol Oles and the Personal that is Political-</title><summary type='text'>I.First, I had to give up horses.The spectacle of meEyes, breasts, a milkshake,The good crotch of a tree.....We should glorify the female roleNo burka, shed the hypnotic leavesOf the Nepalese tea.                 When it could hold seed it could do more.                 When it could be void of seed it was worth more.Before the truculent bitchCould work, consume, but never thinkAnd now we can </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112218762206799461/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112218762206799461' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112218762206799461'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112218762206799461'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/07/gift-for-carol-oles-and-personal-that.html' title='Gift for Carol Oles and the Personal that is Political-'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-112052489060639705</id><published>2005-07-04T17:52:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-07-04T17:54:50.613-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Gracias Por Su Visita</title><summary type='text'>Hotcakes are the new Pink¿ Functioned to Throw Me Into the L-A-N-G-U-A-G-E Alone?I mean I want to tell my story straightexcept that´s not howmy hair grows, &amp; willnever bethe buns journey across the sky.Where the world emerged, or worlds,if we are taking this any seriously.Lets look howour first footstepruins the room, the world.hey share the moonbecause whereever the creationis will write the </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/112052489060639705/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=112052489060639705' title='5 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112052489060639705'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/112052489060639705'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/07/gracias-por-su-visita.html' title='Gracias Por Su Visita'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>5</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111786935174773379</id><published>2005-06-04T00:15:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-06-08T00:13:37.450-07:00</updated><title type='text'>no title</title><summary type='text'>The greatest lights are the stars that reach from the distance.  You, and all the sky.Jesse</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111786935174773379/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111786935174773379' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111786935174773379'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111786935174773379'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/06/no-title.html' title='no title'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111783602392350687</id><published>2005-06-03T14:49:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-06-03T15:00:23.936-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Handle In Light Now That Its Seen</title><summary type='text'>Handle In Light Now That Its SeenThis is my street he sayswalking on the curb join hands with fearbecause there is a direct transmutationwith motion here and approacheach minute detailed in a shadetoday of all days running throughwhen glass is sight or emptyseats are visible downstairsand the grey, a combination, is the splitthe water is level but reducedold thatch and sails going no windthe </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111783602392350687/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111783602392350687' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111783602392350687'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111783602392350687'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/06/handle-in-light-now-that-its-seen.html' title='Handle In Light Now That Its Seen'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111715595704375390</id><published>2005-05-26T18:03:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-07-18T14:14:29.080-07:00</updated><title type='text'>no title</title><summary type='text'>In the Moody Slougha handIn the wind through laurela fistIn the sand of Baghdada gunand I am undone.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111715595704375390/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111715595704375390' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111715595704375390'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111715595704375390'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/05/no-title.html' title='no title'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111689608464379563</id><published>2005-05-23T17:52:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-05-25T00:10:31.200-07:00</updated><title type='text'>With What Penis Like The Virgins Of Birth</title><summary type='text'>"It's not my faultbut I am a participant" (or how we won the war with our cape on)afternoon with gavin douglasFour veins after the gays and manners there and active bow, upon her shuddered bare as ache had bone and wide undress within waving her hair allows it to traceAdonis wise without burning with fire using alone fool of all ice and year to we all, lost country, that windy region and </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111689608464379563/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111689608464379563' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111689608464379563'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111689608464379563'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/05/with-what-penis-like-virgins-of-birth.html' title='With What Penis Like The Virgins Of Birth'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111612156826373119</id><published>2005-05-14T18:44:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-05-14T18:46:12.886-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Only Clear Things</title><summary type='text'>A man with a hammer.The place where a key used to be.You were, my love, you were.Only clear things.Only water and vodka and chardonnay,everything in glass.In order to prove mountainsthere must be a valley.I opened another bottle.You spoke of Anne Sextonand Virginia Woolf, about howwomen who write are women who drown.All your problems look like nails.Poems are people, too,with mothers and </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111612156826373119/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111612156826373119' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111612156826373119'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111612156826373119'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/05/only-clear-things.html' title='Only Clear Things'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111532922172425026</id><published>2005-05-05T14:39:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-05-06T02:13:11.236-07:00</updated><title type='text'>transient servitude</title><summary type='text'>transient servitude(composed of two parts: "proem" and "poem")itmaybeneededtovisitthe cave, the street, but these expandfroman unseenstation outwardover waterings andwrong lefts leading to rightcircumstances and entranceis anywhere they lookwe are there acrossthe canal the flowersare blowing clean past a tower of markingthese marks betray prescribed meaning in the untrue theremust be an </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111532922172425026/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111532922172425026' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111532922172425026'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111532922172425026'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/05/transient-servitude.html' title='transient servitude'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111525004857742181</id><published>2005-05-04T16:40:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-05-04T16:40:48.586-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Here is the Reason</title><summary type='text'>HERE IS THE REASONor explication means to run the mind comb through itselfone could see the implication of questioning is argument was importantor could see the silence in answering and the slant it reveals or see the opening that the spaces provide physically in differenceor consideration brings the veils back up you in front of the screenor sit down and breath through it finding only what is </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111525004857742181/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111525004857742181' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111525004857742181'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111525004857742181'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/05/here-is-reason.html' title='Here is the Reason'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111353913149006103</id><published>2005-04-14T21:24:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-04-14T21:25:31.490-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Blessed Mutual Assured Destruction of Reverence!</title><summary type='text'>My Unitarian Jihad name is Blessed Mutual Assured Destruction of Reverence.Take Unitarian Jihad Name Generator today!Created with Rum and Monkey's Name Generator Generator.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111353913149006103/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111353913149006103' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111353913149006103'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111353913149006103'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/04/blessed-mutual-assured-destruction-of.html' title='Blessed Mutual Assured Destruction of Reverence!'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111350293318362975</id><published>2005-04-14T11:21:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-04-14T11:22:13.183-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Strange How</title><summary type='text'>It’s strange how snow falls in some placesand not othershow in places it’s thick enough to fall throughStrange how being single makes you a writer againhow pain makes you a writerFalling into snowIt’s odd how a lake in the middle of nothingodd how four hours sleep makes you a writer againhow five a.m. makes you a writerstrange how mountains give way to sandthen stretch to flat Americato central </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111350293318362975/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111350293318362975' title='5 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111350293318362975'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111350293318362975'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/04/strange-how.html' title='Strange How'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>5</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111306358229192098</id><published>2005-04-09T09:16:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-04-09T09:19:42.293-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Dear Earl,</title><summary type='text'>I think getting to know someone is a lot like having tea. At first you sit properly with your best manners and polite conversation. There is the weather, poetry, then talk of the past. You start to look forward to that shared time.  In fact, you start to feel a bond in knowing that you don't have to start from the beginning anymore, there is enough shared knowledge to start where you left off </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111306358229192098/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111306358229192098' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111306358229192098'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111306358229192098'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/04/dear-earl.html' title='Dear Earl,'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111211323790613838</id><published>2005-03-29T08:19:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-05-26T18:20:35.666-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Infantryman</title><summary type='text'>Angus bloominghills unhid and bald out like eyes.A pen, a wretched claw,a carbomb, a sickled sky.Crow black bursting starlingsof funnel cloud intothe tracers by the Blackhawk air.Daybreak mosque,the morning prayer.Rubble swallows, mudnestsamong the dead.When you return, I will lick the glassout of your forehead,tuck you whole into the light.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111211323790613838/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111211323790613838' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111211323790613838'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111211323790613838'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/03/infantryman_29.html' title='Infantryman'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111142004980431424</id><published>2005-03-21T07:44:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-03-21T07:47:29.806-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Hope Street</title><summary type='text'>New York has a street named after everythingI have ever walked past, pretending not to see.Humans are traffic, trading scars.I’d cross the East River, but it is only an inlet,saltwater frozen for the winter.This is a city weary of being told,an old woman who just wants to go to sleep.Although she is frozen for the winterI will find a way to live through this season,not quite frozen, not yet made </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111142004980431424/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111142004980431424' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111142004980431424'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111142004980431424'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/03/hope-street.html' title='Hope Street'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111120181871384537</id><published>2005-03-18T19:09:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-03-18T19:10:18.716-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Natalie Portman</title><summary type='text'>Why, father  must I, Jerusalem  when I left the theater crying and  those earrings dangled from your hair  Who, mother  are we, California  with a Chinese stripe across our lip     Half of the time we're gone, but we don't know where  and we don't know here     The dancer in bed between us  the differencebetween your Anne Frank and mine     When I followed   your coffee cup tongue-thrust  amidst </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111120181871384537/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111120181871384537' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111120181871384537'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111120181871384537'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/03/natalie-portman.html' title='Natalie Portman'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111069193032326291</id><published>2005-03-12T21:29:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-03-21T17:03:05.743-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Still Life with Nabisco</title><summary type='text'>I. It was lying therea breakfast squarecool glazed stripesa sugared crust likea scab from the severancedisconnected like the bouquet of fetus filled balloons at the back doorrisingangerpumped out flaccidthe tonguelike a tongueor a breakfast squareportion of satisfactionsquared II.PiThree point oneforever a portion of a circlelike the platebisected by a dessert forkon the Rhode Island Red </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111069193032326291/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111069193032326291' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111069193032326291'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111069193032326291'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/03/still-life-with-nabisco.html' title='Still Life with Nabisco'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111034411487565558</id><published>2005-03-08T20:48:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-03-21T17:05:04.640-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Sapphic Verse-</title><summary type='text'>She could pull me into her softnesshair warm like bread and breasts risingShe could say why and know why and i couldput my mouth over her and know all of the words.The man,lost in a maze of deception could onlytuck a verb, hide lie and try hismouth over me but couldn't get the words he couldn'tknow why or say why and only wanted back inside.The man inside the woman can see the beauty of his </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111034411487565558/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111034411487565558' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111034411487565558'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111034411487565558'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/03/sapphic-verse.html' title='Sapphic Verse-'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-111034360239232360</id><published>2005-03-08T20:43:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-03-08T20:46:42.393-08:00</updated><title type='text'>My tongue on the table  ( After Chandler)</title><summary type='text'>My tongue on the table, yours held Mine was bad and learned to slither down the neck and over the back and around to softness and need, I learned to fuck like a life depended on it.  Secrets of your desire tucked inside me.  The deeper you wanted to bury it the deeper I wanted to take you in.Yours was truly, then it was Taking on the take while you dragged your self up the tower, while the bower </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/111034360239232360/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=111034360239232360' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111034360239232360'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/111034360239232360'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/03/my-tongue-on-table-after-chandler.html' title='My tongue on the table  ( After Chandler)'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110870941521781449</id><published>2005-02-17T22:33:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-02-17T22:50:15.220-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Orphic Waltz for Jesse</title><summary type='text'>How jealous I am of your radio waves.Of your midnight wherewolf sessions.Of your boxed plums.While you are transgendered and rampantsomewhere, a lamplight, I am unfamiliar.Those letters were written long ago and youyou are stranded in the city lights and the darknessthe darkness so good you melt the rain.In the decoding of bedsheets the radio flickersnow you are Delphicnow you are.Your radio </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110870941521781449/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110870941521781449' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110870941521781449'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110870941521781449'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/02/orphic-waltz-for-jesse.html' title='Orphic Waltz for Jesse'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110852149240896703</id><published>2005-02-15T18:37:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-02-15T18:38:12.410-08:00</updated><title type='text'>rabbit 3</title><summary type='text'>went down the holethrough the loam damp worm spacevelvet undergrounddowndownworld with no endJesusfalling in me falling on me falling and fallingrelentless fallinga bead eye into the dirt lashinto the nostril loamover the fur and down downdeep into the animaldark leviathandark swallowedpast the lips</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110852149240896703/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110852149240896703' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110852149240896703'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110852149240896703'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/02/rabbit-3.html' title='rabbit 3'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110792576071776295</id><published>2005-02-08T21:07:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-02-08T21:09:20.716-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Bridge and Tunnel</title><summary type='text'>give us your Bushwick,your Brighton,your Bensonhurst,your Bedford- Stuyvesantyearning to breathe free</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110792576071776295/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110792576071776295' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110792576071776295'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110792576071776295'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/02/bridge-and-tunnel.html' title='Bridge and Tunnel'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110770902434470783</id><published>2005-02-06T08:55:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-02-21T19:48:16.266-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Magician's wife</title><summary type='text'>cut in half for the publicimpaled upon a sharpened screamburned alive and mutatedfor the mansponge balls and rubber dovesprat falls and circus ducksThat the coin collapsed in the bottle thatthe man pounded into his own hand to release I used to beand then I was not.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110770902434470783/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110770902434470783' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110770902434470783'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110770902434470783'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/02/magicians-wife.html' title='Magician&apos;s wife'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110731796356848885</id><published>2005-02-01T20:18:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-02-01T20:19:23.566-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Homolinguistics for Sivan</title><summary type='text'>forgive mewe were deliriousthat plum in your boxin my boxso sweet and foldedthat I have eateneden and you.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110731796356848885/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110731796356848885' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110731796356848885'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110731796356848885'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/02/homolinguistics-for-sivan.html' title='Homolinguistics for Sivan'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110689596688484903</id><published>2005-01-27T23:05:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-01-28T13:05:22.523-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Highly Disturbed</title><summary type='text'>What the frock coats of coal crowshidden shears to leaden leafletsa white table cloth, a slashed cowslipThe fall of the landscape to crippled cliffshand kisses on the backs of dim dead sooteverything takes place in a civilized wayFirst pupils enlarge to feed on effigy of lightunder open shirts never so much Manhattan skyline!ceiling candlelight in the bottle of childhood tokeep out, </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110689596688484903/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110689596688484903' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110689596688484903'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110689596688484903'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/01/highly-disturbed.html' title='Highly Disturbed'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110663634803861084</id><published>2005-01-24T22:56:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-01-24T23:00:48.880-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Ash For Wednesday</title><summary type='text'>I didn't meanthat I didn'tthat an I melonis which thanthe blue tourmaline if there is tourmalineif there is ashif there was firethat we are no longerIt was here in the morning-Skin pepperWhen you were your breath Like my father's port but your arm was sleeping musiccrumpled like sheets,Eyelash folded wings.Didn't IWhich me aloneThat I didn't wantIf there was ashIf there was </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110663634803861084/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110663634803861084' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110663634803861084'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110663634803861084'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/01/ash-for-wednesday.html' title='Ash For Wednesday'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110529012858909016</id><published>2005-01-09T08:59:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-01-18T22:47:01.540-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Orphic Letters 1-9</title><summary type='text'>Letter 1A thousand and one times today I thought of you.Purr at my hands, Breasts rising like heat, the celebration of bodies differentYou, bearded and strong with need.You, mouth and tongue and hands.What could I say today, that I wasn't delighted, that my body didn't wake to aCalling for more, that a thousand and one times today I thought of you, that like the River Merchant's Wife, </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110529012858909016/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110529012858909016' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110529012858909016'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110529012858909016'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/01/orphic-letters-1-9.html' title='Orphic Letters 1-9'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110494153753687582</id><published>2005-01-05T08:06:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-01-05T08:13:53.853-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Letter to Jack Spicer</title><summary type='text'>Dear Jack,Barnacles are complicated things. You delight in the strangeness of thick ribbed carbon laden shells, where I do not.  Sometimes picking up a sand dollar off the ocean inter-tidal zone with barnacles on it is inspiring, but when I've looked closely, the barnacles were still alive and it bothered me.  Unlike words floating into the universe of forever, these things smell.  I don't </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110494153753687582/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110494153753687582' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110494153753687582'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110494153753687582'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/01/letter-to-jack-spicer.html' title='Letter to Jack Spicer'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110482023894202452</id><published>2005-01-03T22:28:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-02-19T21:40:25.390-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Red States</title><summary type='text'>I imagine cutting myself tonightLetting out America.  I imagine my arms spread likeJesus with his arms blown off in war. You think the cut would be the wrist inA pristine enamel tub, but you are wrongI imagineMy white forearms spread with a knife, butOne is not my hand, maybe it is you that cuts me America.But I am cuttingAnd we are there with our white, white skinThin and young with this mouth </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110482023894202452/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110482023894202452' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110482023894202452'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110482023894202452'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2005/01/red-states.html' title='Red States'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110445626254947600</id><published>2004-12-30T17:23:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2004-12-30T17:24:22.550-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Pantoum For War</title><summary type='text'>We go to war with what we haveButcher peace for what we lackImprovise a Dumsfeld knaveBuild the future on soldiers' backsWe butcher peace for what we lackElectrodes, beatings, torture collarsWe build the future on their backsOil, poppies, death for dollars.Electrodes, beatings, torture collarsMachiavelli and elaborate liesOil, poppies death for dollarsButcher all the endless spies</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110445626254947600/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110445626254947600' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110445626254947600'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110445626254947600'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/12/pantoum-for-war.html' title='Pantoum For War'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110430431550787713</id><published>2004-12-28T23:10:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-12-28T23:11:55.506-08:00</updated><title type='text'>before there was a voice</title><summary type='text'>before there was a voiceall the thought went into the sky was a wrestling glancethree movements dropped film onthe eyes may have glazed oversleep and a dot placed inside vision became an event and the wall foresaw the spectacle was the fragmentation internal or outside there are constellations holding under grip will not contain standingbut now only mumblingsthe placement was </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110430431550787713/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110430431550787713' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110430431550787713'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110430431550787713'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/12/before-there-was-voice.html' title='before there was a voice'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110410720672209217</id><published>2004-12-26T16:20:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-12-26T16:26:46.723-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Lorca on the Duende</title><summary type='text'>Lorca on The Duende: Theory and DivertissmentAny man - any artist, as Nietzsche would say - climbs the stairway in the tower of his perfection at the cost of a struggle with a duende - not with an angel, as some have maintained, or with his muse.  This fundamental distinction must be kept in mind if the root of a work of art is to be grasped.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110410720672209217/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110410720672209217' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110410720672209217'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110410720672209217'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/12/lorca-on-duende.html' title='Lorca on the Duende'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110291904519924585</id><published>2004-12-12T22:22:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-12-15T20:39:38.460-08:00</updated><title type='text'>What Babies Really Do            after Bernadette Mayer</title><summary type='text'>Meconium, a splash of darkness on the Rocks, a frail hiccup of astounding courageRepeated and defeated the late breakfastAnd early midnightThe ghost cloud goo dripping intoPolyester pants with cotton linings likeb read lines during the greatDepression and melancholia afterTwo dried cracker s in the earliest mornHeaving and heaving like orgasm on a good dayBut it is in the throat and </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110291904519924585/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110291904519924585' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110291904519924585'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110291904519924585'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/12/what-babies-really-do-after-bernadette.html' title='What Babies Really Do            after Bernadette Mayer'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110222436711749810</id><published>2004-12-04T21:22:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-01-21T20:10:36.540-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Bean Sheep</title><summary type='text'>FEEL the softness and the quality of the man of five o’clock shadow with temple grey hair in his yellow challenger fleece which provides freedom of movement for hiking, backpacking, or cross-country skiing, or smiling interminably with his arm around the downcast blond watching her feet. She is Stepford smiling on 83, he is camp pants on 61. They are not black with corduroy coated child under red</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110222436711749810/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110222436711749810' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110222436711749810'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110222436711749810'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/12/bean-sheep.html' title='Bean Sheep'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110117315071129847</id><published>2004-11-22T17:24:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-11-22T17:25:50.710-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Interactive Reading</title><summary type='text'>Love and transformationSouls of the unborn pressing hipsWhisperingHippolytusHippolytus What have you become?</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110117315071129847/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110117315071129847' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110117315071129847'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110117315071129847'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/11/interactive-reading.html' title='Interactive Reading'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110072768906604110</id><published>2004-11-17T13:37:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-11-17T13:41:29.066-08:00</updated><title type='text'>For Jacques Derrida, With Apologies</title><summary type='text'>Every wall is made of bricks, even you.It is simpler this way:give everything an opposite.Make every answer into a question.When you are a monument, I hope you mock the air.Use your words like a pistol.Wear your hopeless clock like a slipper.How else to explain concrete and satin?Love and loyalty? Men and other men?Before long you will be immune to daylight.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110072768906604110/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110072768906604110' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110072768906604110'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110072768906604110'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/11/for-jacques-derrida-with-apologies.html' title='For Jacques Derrida, With Apologies'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-110021009249673202</id><published>2004-11-11T13:52:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-11-11T14:00:56.830-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Veteran's Day</title><summary type='text'>I totally respect the people who serve, and today we honor them with Veteran's day. With all our jingoism, I am still stuck on the isolationist, pre-emptive striking, arrogant mentality of Bush. I am shamed by his arrogance, as is every man and woman wearing the uniform. WE DO NOT BELONG IN IRAQ. These are my convictions. I want the backward “Jesus-will-solve-your-crap,” “My God is more entitled </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/110021009249673202/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=110021009249673202' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110021009249673202'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/110021009249673202'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/11/veterans-day.html' title='Veteran&apos;s Day'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109994559177526776</id><published>2004-11-08T13:18:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-11-08T12:26:31.776-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Navigating nycgirl.com</title><summary type='text'>OK, so it was a bit confusing for me, but I figured out how to maneuver around nycgirl.com and Rae's column. We should all go there, so she can make more money. : ) Plus, it is yet another format for reading the writing of one of us Madrid kids, so, we should do it for that reason as well. Also, if you end up in the right spot, there's a weird "Rae dancing" thing happening, which can be a bit </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109994559177526776/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109994559177526776' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109994559177526776'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109994559177526776'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/11/navigating-nycgirlcom.html' title='Navigating nycgirl.com'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109984963461667551</id><published>2004-11-07T09:44:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-11-07T09:47:14.616-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Parallel</title><summary type='text'>I change in and outof you like clotheswe live the same lifeconcurrently, mine is amberand yours maroon, cold as velvetbut you don’t understand thatyou are my jazz,my dark chocolate and black coffee,my bus pulling up to the curbexactly on time_________by the way, everyone, please check out my new web column at www.nycgirl.com (not to be confused with www.nycgirls.com, which is an </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109984963461667551/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109984963461667551' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109984963461667551'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109984963461667551'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/11/parallel.html' title='Parallel'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109977748295233294</id><published>2004-11-06T13:43:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-11-06T15:16:56.603-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Pan de Muerto</title><summary type='text'>Pan de MuertoFor Cesar VallejoGrease a cookie sheetMix vigorously, then divideMold the skull and crossbones to your delightServe warmEat sugared skulls with anise and milk.El Dia de Todos Los MuertosFour years of TuesdaysEating the sugared skullFormed at home.Angelitos, souls of the children who have diedViejas, souls of the old who have diedBombs dropped like cascaronesBreak </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109977748295233294/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109977748295233294' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109977748295233294'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109977748295233294'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/11/pan-de-muerto.html' title='Pan de Muerto'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109950736076303634</id><published>2004-11-03T10:40:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2004-11-03T16:15:52.160-08:00</updated><title type='text'>When You Were Obsessed With Blood. (For Rae)</title><summary type='text'>Thinking about you and your red state.So much blood between your coast and mine.The blood of so many soldiersso many civiliansand stillHow uneducated can a country be?Not that I was a fan of Kerry butanything would have been better.This wasn't meant to be a poem(thank g-d)just scattered thoughts and youso far awayin the loveliest shade of blue.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109950736076303634/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109950736076303634' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109950736076303634'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109950736076303634'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/11/when-you-were-obsessed-with-blood-for.html' title='When You Were Obsessed With Blood. (For Rae)'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109876405364131582</id><published>2004-10-25T21:12:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-11-05T18:05:16.233-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Old Salt</title><summary type='text'>Alternate titles: Don't bite more than you can chewSpits or SwallowsRinse optionalOLD SALTAt 21, I took Sheep Production 101, an animal science prerequisite that taught me, among other things, that a dressed lamb was really a slaughtered lamb hanging on a hook. I learned how to diagram cuts of meat, how to sheer, how to butcher, and how to castrate sheep in three ways. I read about ram </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109876405364131582/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109876405364131582' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109876405364131582'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109876405364131582'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/old-salt.html' title='Old Salt'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109857884708760223</id><published>2004-10-23T17:45:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-23T17:47:27.086-07:00</updated><title type='text'>To Watch His Hands--</title><summary type='text'> My father’s fatherTrained his hands with sticks spread across thumb to pinkyTo navigate a chord by six.Sticks and blood, sticks and blood.He played through the Depression,Through rotten fruit bereft of bruisesFree from the backs of supermarkets,Played through train jumping and seeing his brotherLose his legs. Raymundo- God of the world on wheelsSticks and blood, sticks and blood.</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109857884708760223/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109857884708760223' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109857884708760223'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109857884708760223'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/to-watch-his-hands.html' title='To Watch His Hands--'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109857844529771179</id><published>2004-10-23T17:39:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-23T17:40:45.296-07:00</updated><title type='text'>The Sleep of Reason</title><summary type='text'>What’s all the shouting about? What’s your hurry?I have not been bit by a scorpion.  I am deaf!I think there will be sleep again at Christmas.We will have a nice Christmas, Goya.I am not bit by a scorpion, I am deaf!Saturn has an erection while eating his children!We will have a nice snow at Christmas, Goya.Executions have left the liberal hydra dead.Saturn has an erection while eating </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109857844529771179/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109857844529771179' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109857844529771179'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109857844529771179'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/sleep-of-reason.html' title='The Sleep of Reason'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109857350517224504</id><published>2004-10-23T16:15:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-23T16:18:25.173-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Thanks For the Letter</title><summary type='text'>Thanks For the Letter(as it looks back upon itself)Aa is for liar listless stirs to not living on his lens is so mossy just buttonsmining quake in new wound lunar;stroll out or monsoon inroll equations third skill or more than nothing to remainretreat into soil, mix tinctures shout lost numbers torrid worried not run, hire song to isle, nail something.Bb is forbarker nail </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109857350517224504/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109857350517224504' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109857350517224504'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109857350517224504'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/thanks-for-letter.html' title='Thanks For the Letter'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109770974945338578</id><published>2004-10-13T16:19:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-13T16:22:29.453-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Chandler, Charlotte and Naomi</title><summary type='text'>Charlotte gave birth to a beautiful girl yesterday, October 12th, at 3:35 pm Spanish time (around 8:35 am central standard). They are sitting around in bliss, just enjoying these next few days together with each other and Mom Freeman. Naomi weighs 3.150 kilos (around 6 pounds 9 ounces) and has curly locks of black hair.Great JOBMazeltov</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109770974945338578/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109770974945338578' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109770974945338578'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109770974945338578'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/chandler-charlotte-and-naomi.html' title='Chandler, Charlotte and Naomi'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109762485292685354</id><published>2004-10-12T16:41:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-12T16:47:32.926-07:00</updated><title type='text'>I don't want a pickle...</title><summary type='text'>I just shared this with Lilit, but I thought the rest of you might appreciate this as well. On that note, and to get side-tracked before I begin, is there anyone out there other than Chandler, Jesse, Lilit, and occasionally myself? Do any of our fellow Madrid writers even read this? Oh well, those who read this blog are cooler anyway. : ) OK, so, I had a dream the other night that Peter Gizzi was</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109762485292685354/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109762485292685354' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109762485292685354'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109762485292685354'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/i-dont-want-pickle.html' title='I don&apos;t want a pickle...'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109745080891931594</id><published>2004-10-10T16:25:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-10T16:26:48.920-07:00</updated><title type='text'>A Set Sin</title><summary type='text'>The beginning spun all through the called curtainand produced no memory, no photographexcept for the fragments that drop a mistonto the motions of the day and scrollpast, eating the dinner of eternity.This waiting, why will it not introducea single sign, a flash to introducethe coming of a tear in this curtainwhich has suffered, hiding an eternity.Instead these symbols, or a photograph</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109745080891931594/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109745080891931594' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109745080891931594'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109745080891931594'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/set-sin.html' title='A Set Sin'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109736446380829793</id><published>2004-10-09T15:48:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-09T16:29:05.990-07:00</updated><title type='text'>It was awhile before I understood what was between the stairs</title><summary type='text'>there is no ring tighter, this is not an attempt to explain,these symbols are everywhererepeating is the function unlikethis morning or even nowbut there is no pattern more bound to itself it speaks of continuous not a smile or lovingly unlike childrenscreaming it beckons and even hereit seems silent, a light only itselfbut if the ear is pressedtightly now against the </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109736446380829793/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109736446380829793' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109736446380829793'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109736446380829793'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/it-was-awhile-before-i-understood-what.html' title='It was awhile before I understood what was between the stairs'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109736189839059001</id><published>2004-10-09T15:35:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-09T15:44:58.390-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Finding My Veils</title><summary type='text'>First I am going to dieinside the tavern inside the chestbut tightness is not an emotion anymore (but it can be a state)Then I am going to sleepnot because of death but in avoidanceof now (not tomorrow) and of course the fingernails grow even thenNext it is time for washingthe skin slinks like a corner in this unplanned citywhere only soap did 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src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109684787253315881</id><published>2004-10-03T16:53:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-03T16:59:56.836-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Williamsburg (for Sivani)</title><summary type='text'>If you were here, I'd build a sukkah.My home is waterless, butI am a peninsula.We will build a hut from our hair.My home is waterless, butif you were here, I'd be sleeping.We will build a hut from our hairand call it God.If you were here, I'd be sleepingoutside, the sky constellationless,and call it God,jutting out yet still attached.Outside. The sky constellationless.I am a </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109684787253315881/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109684787253315881' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109684787253315881'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109684787253315881'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/10/williamsburg-for-sivani.html' title='Williamsburg (for Sivani)'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109596830862922842</id><published>2004-09-23T13:34:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-10-02T21:05:24.320-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Autumn Lament</title><summary type='text'>I want to crawl back into my daughter’s bedPast stars, dark, and ephemeral light,Back into the moments with the Stinky Cheese ManAnd laugh at the words, the pictures.There with her witch-broom hair tickling my face on the pillowThe warmth of her against me, her little stuffed dog. Iwant to be cramped into the space of her kickingFeel her foot stretched into my ribs, where we are safe.My </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109596830862922842/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109596830862922842' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109596830862922842'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109596830862922842'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/09/autumn-lament.html' title='Autumn Lament'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109546909517235118</id><published>2004-09-17T17:54:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-09-18T23:10:08.480-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Bank Friday 9/17</title><summary type='text'>                                                                                        (for Tom)I went to the ATM machine to deposit my check, stuck the card in and punched numbers, licked the envelope, then I almost collapsed.  Everything swirled.  I held on to consciousness and the wall long enough to hit cancel and pocket my card.  I could think clearly enough to recall that the last thing </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109546909517235118/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109546909517235118' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109546909517235118'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109546909517235118'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/09/bank-friday-917.html' title='Bank Friday 9/17'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109503543653239121</id><published>2004-09-12T17:14:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-09-12T17:30:36.533-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Procrastinating &amp; Politics</title><summary type='text'>I've been studying all day, and will be studying again the moment I finish this. Hence the fact that I am dicking around at the Blog... My point... I'll have to come up with one if I'm going to make this procrastinating thing work... Democracy. I pissed this guy off in one of my classes on Friday. I told him I had written a paper on Bush's speech at the Republican National Convention. I had </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109503543653239121/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109503543653239121' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109503543653239121'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109503543653239121'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/09/procrastinating-politics.html' title='Procrastinating &amp; Politics'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109491884942618755</id><published>2004-09-11T09:00:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-09-11T09:07:29.426-07:00</updated><title type='text'>excerpt from my book</title><summary type='text'>Depending how you were raised and how much money your family had, the proper pronunciation of the city’s name is either "Greensburr," with a clipped, harsh end, or "Greensburrah," with a genteel fade. The genderless Greensboro that I enunciated is a compromise between the two cities, between Lee Street and Fisher Park, bars on windows and boats in the driveway. It is the immigrant’s Greensboro, </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109491884942618755/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109491884942618755' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109491884942618755'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109491884942618755'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/09/excerpt-from-my-book.html' title='excerpt from my book'/><author><name>Lilit Marcus</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109486689369174886</id><published>2004-09-10T18:36:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-09-12T11:13:11.283-07:00</updated><title type='text'>new stuff</title><summary type='text'>I've received several emails about people wanting to put stuff up and not knowing how.  I really don't know how to help you.  If you are a named user, (not of drugs) you likely have a password.  If you go the http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/  or the www.blogger.com site, you can probably enter your name and password, then you get the dashboard.  At the dashboard you can click on edit or </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109486689369174886/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109486689369174886' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109486689369174886'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109486689369174886'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/09/new-stuff.html' title='new stuff'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109417839694638104</id><published>2004-09-02T19:18:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-09-02T19:26:36.946-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Poking Fun</title><summary type='text'>Because I haven't logged onto the blog in forever... Did anyone notice that Rae is in fact among us? Yet she, much like Madonna, has decided to go by her Jewish name - Lilit. So, while some of you may be wondering who the stranger is among us, it is in fact our beloved Rae. Fortunately, unlike Madonna, Rae is actually Jewish, and, as of yet, I have not seen her wearing a $26 red string bracelet </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109417839694638104/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109417839694638104' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109417839694638104'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109417839694638104'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/09/poking-fun.html' title='Poking Fun'/><author><name>Sivan</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109365662018509424</id><published>2004-08-27T18:28:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-08-27T18:34:19.563-07:00</updated><title type='text'>HELP WITH FORMS</title><summary type='text'>A certain poetry class is studying forms. What's your favorite form?  How does it work?Pantoumhttp://www.baymoon.com/~ariadne/form/pantoum.htmFour lines in first quatrain. Second and Fourth line become first and third line of the next quatrain, and again for as many quatrains as you want. The last quatrain should repeat the first and third lines as second and fourth. Lines vary slightly, and </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109365662018509424/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109365662018509424' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109365662018509424'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109365662018509424'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/08/help-with-forms.html' title='HELP WITH FORMS'/><author><name>Jes</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='31' height='22' src='http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/HiJesse/images.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7907071.post-109353442789693304</id><published>2004-08-26T08:19:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2004-08-26T08:33:47.896-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Consider the Shadow the Sculpture Casts</title><summary type='text'>Consider the Shadow the Sculpture CastsFor CharlotteIf it is not a gathering of wordsit is a color always near youtransmitting thoughts the moments no longeremptying into because of shared blueof course sky water jeans on the floorbut also (my) eyes change towards purein mornings of bed shifting doublingmemory by suspending the betweenthe intruder transforms to the expectedto </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/feeds/109353442789693304/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7907071&amp;postID=109353442789693304' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109353442789693304'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7907071/posts/default/109353442789693304'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://completefiction4us.blogspot.com/2004/08/consider-shadow-sculpture-casts.html' title='Consider the Shadow the Sculpture Casts'/><author><name>BloggerRM</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry></feed>
